The Earth-Romulan War
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The Earth-Romulan War
Here is my take on the Earth-Romulan War (reposted into its own thread).
Fleet Admiral Emily Quinn
Commanding Officer
11th 'Pegasus' Fleet
Fleet Captain Liarra Von
Commanding Officer
Starbase 332
Commanding Officer
11th 'Pegasus' Fleet
Fleet Captain Liarra Von
Commanding Officer
Starbase 332
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Re: The Earth-Romulan War
I read it before and found it very nice. much better than mine. lol
Re: The Earth-Romulan War
Looks great. I think that with this being a past event though, it should be altered so that it refers to everything that happened in the past tense - some of the stuff particularly about ENT season 4 is written in the present tense which makes it sound more like a synopsis of the episodes rather than a historical account. I'd also recommend removing the references to the episodes that the events occurred in, since standard form on the wiki so far has been not to include those.
Other than that, I like it. Well written and it really does the war justice.
Other than that, I like it. Well written and it really does the war justice.
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Re: The Earth-Romulan War
Okay, we're still waiting on those changes to be made before we vote.
Re: The Earth-Romulan War
I will take a look at those changes in the next couple of days when I get a chance to spend some time on it.
Fleet Admiral Emily Quinn
Commanding Officer
11th 'Pegasus' Fleet
Fleet Captain Liarra Von
Commanding Officer
Starbase 332
Commanding Officer
11th 'Pegasus' Fleet
Fleet Captain Liarra Von
Commanding Officer
Starbase 332