Romulans and the Romulan Star Empire

[Williams]

At last, the next instalment of the articles I've been writing on the major species. For your reading pleasure, I present to you the Romulans and the Romulan Star Empire:

http://wiki.pegasusfleet.net/index.php? ... ox/Romulan
http://wiki.pegasusfleet.net/index.php? ... tar_Empire

There are a few picture placeholders that have yet to be filled, but that's a minor thing. Due to the extensive amount of available information on the Romulans, I also plan at some point in the future various off-shoot topics, as linked to in these (such as Romulan ranks, ships, etc), and these links have been included, but their information not yet written.

[FruitLoop]

I only found one problem. The word "jingoistic". I don't think people are going to want to use a dictionary to read the article. Not everyone went to college/uni/whatever.

[Williams]

Altered. Is that better?

We used the term so much in my history classes at school about the British Empire, I forgot that it's not always a widely known term in some places.

[FruitLoop]

Much better.