Caitians & Cait

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Re: Caitians & Cait

Post by Terris » Fri Dec 07, 2012 3:39 am

Looks good.
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Re: Caitians & Cait

Post by Confusedfire » Mon Dec 10, 2012 2:08 am

You could go into more detail about Caitians and their family and the importance of it. The planet looks good, and the family bit isn't necessary, but it could go a long way. Aside from this it looks good!
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Re: Caitians & Cait

Post by FruitLoop » Tue Dec 11, 2012 4:41 am

Updated to take out the point about the Caitians being descendants of Kzinti. According to Blackcat, it is not true. It now reads as that is what the Kzinti believe and everyone else thinks they are cousin races.

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Re: Caitians & Cait

Post by Confusedfire » Tue Dec 11, 2012 4:57 pm

Looks good boss!
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