http://wiki.pegasusfleet.net/index.php? ... ian_Am_Tal
The Andorian Am Tal, an intelligence organization for Andoria. I had to make a lot of it up, so I'd like as much input as possible. Thanks!
Andorian Am Tal
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Re: Andorian Am Tal
You referred to cavern leaders in one sentence but did not describe them elsewhere that I saw. Did i miss the original reference to that "rank"
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Re: Andorian Am Tal
Okay, I edited it a bit to give more description about the cavern leaders. Does it look alright now?
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Re: Andorian Am Tal
It looked good to me before I called that problem. They sound great and something Viper might run into.
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Re: Andorian Am Tal
That sounds like a good mission. However, these people are part of the Federation. They just aren't part of Starfleet. But discovering an Am Tal agent among your crew...that would be an interesting mission...
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Re: Andorian Am Tal
It would make a great character...