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Andorian Am Tal

Post by FruitLoop » Wed Feb 06, 2013 2:18 am

http://wiki.pegasusfleet.net/index.php? ... ian_Am_Tal

The Andorian Am Tal, an intelligence organization for Andoria. I had to make a lot of it up, so I'd like as much input as possible. Thanks! :)

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Re: Andorian Am Tal

Post by Thomas Smith » Wed Feb 06, 2013 2:51 am

You referred to cavern leaders in one sentence but did not describe them elsewhere that I saw. Did i miss the original reference to that "rank"

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Re: Andorian Am Tal

Post by FruitLoop » Wed Feb 06, 2013 3:21 am

Okay, I edited it a bit to give more description about the cavern leaders. Does it look alright now?

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Re: Andorian Am Tal

Post by Thomas Smith » Wed Feb 06, 2013 3:35 am

It looked good to me before I called that problem. They sound great and something Viper might run into.

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Re: Andorian Am Tal

Post by FruitLoop » Wed Feb 06, 2013 3:54 am

That sounds like a good mission. :) However, these people are part of the Federation. They just aren't part of Starfleet. But discovering an Am Tal agent among your crew...that would be an interesting mission...

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Re: Andorian Am Tal

Post by Thomas Smith » Wed Feb 06, 2013 9:10 pm

It would make a great character...:)

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