Page 1 of 1
Andorian Am Tal
Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 2:18 am
by FruitLoop
http://wiki.pegasusfleet.net/index.php? ... ian_Am_Tal
The Andorian Am Tal, an intelligence organization for Andoria. I had to make a lot of it up, so I'd like as much input as possible. Thanks!
Re: Andorian Am Tal
Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 2:51 am
by Thomas Smith
You referred to cavern leaders in one sentence but did not describe them elsewhere that I saw. Did i miss the original reference to that "rank"
Re: Andorian Am Tal
Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 3:21 am
by FruitLoop
Okay, I edited it a bit to give more description about the cavern leaders. Does it look alright now?
Re: Andorian Am Tal
Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 3:35 am
by Thomas Smith
It looked good to me before I called that problem. They sound great and something Viper might run into.
Re: Andorian Am Tal
Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 3:54 am
by FruitLoop
That sounds like a good mission.
However, these people are part of the Federation. They just aren't part of Starfleet. But discovering an Am Tal agent among your crew...that would be an interesting mission...
Re: Andorian Am Tal
Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 9:10 pm
by Thomas Smith
It would make a great character...