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Here is my take on the Earth-Romulan War (reposted into its own thread).

I read it before and found it very nice. much better than mine. lol

Looks great. I think that with this being a past event though, it should be altered so that it refers to everything that happened in the past tense - some of the stuff particularly about ENT season 4 is written in the present tense which makes it sound more like a synopsis of the episodes rather than a historical account. I'd also recommend removing the references to the episodes that the events occurred in, since standard form on the wiki so far has been not to include those.

Other than that, I like it. Well written and it really does the war justice.

Okay, we're still waiting on those changes to be made before we vote.

I will take a look at those changes in the next couple of days when I get a chance to spend some time on it.